Perhaps a little short! However, great use of mise en scene with special effects, costume and good use of diegetic sound effects. Well done. You demonstrate 180 degree rule, match on action and S/RS. And its very original.
Perhaps some of your framing in the S/RS sequence could be tighter – there is perhaps a lot of fresh air to the right of the subject. Think a little bit more about the composition. Low level 4
Perhaps a little short! However, great use of mise en scene with special effects, costume and good use of diegetic sound effects. Well done. You demonstrate 180 degree rule, match on action and S/RS. And its very original.
ReplyDeletePerhaps some of your framing in the S/RS sequence could be tighter – there is perhaps a lot of fresh air to the right of the subject. Think a little bit more about the composition. Low level 4